The greatest sin

The greatest sin

A Poem by Acropolix

The greatest sin of mankind
From the first of days to the last
Shan't be an act of blasphemy

The greatest work of history
From the injustice of our own kin
Shan't be the end of godless men

The greatest joke pulled of
From the seed of life's corruption
Shall be the making of Adam and Eve.

© 2013 Acropolix


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Acropolix
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Sarcastic overtones. Epic!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think this is a real witty write...considering how you managed to tie in a religious perspective as well...Adam and Eve did commit the first sin ever, and it makes sense for that flaw to be passed down to their offspring...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Acropolix

11 Years Ago

Glad to hear you liked the poem!
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

11 Years Ago

:)
I don't get the theme but I understand the feelings~!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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