idk :/

look up at the sky

what is it that you see?

is it the stars that shine so brilliantly?

 

Look around,

you'll find the moon

smiling happily at you

 

The clouds of darkness wait for you

to notice thier presence among the stars

they wait and wait untill noticed

and then they finally let go

 

these cloudes are unlike others

they tend to know a story most dont

when they let the rain fall

they let thier feelings go

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

help me come up with a title?? cx

Reviews

[Judy Ponceby]

Lovely write. :) "Clouded Rain"?

[SR Urie]

Nicely done. How about the 'stars hurting moon's feelings"?

[alexlessah]

This is an amazing poem, I love it!

[Blessed_Angel]

Great poem well written. Good work.