begotten

 we can sail the worlds longest fountains

jump off trees on the world's highest mountains

a story never told is just lost not forgotten

we are all products of love and begotten

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Lol I missed this one, nonethless Linda, begotten means like reproduction or procreation so it fits the message that is being conveyed pretty well. A very good poem I thought :)

[Linda]

begotten doesn't fit. Grammar at start of sentence too. I likey the poetry xoxoxox

[Abigail T]

first off, i love your rhymes! in poetry, i always look for rhymes that stretch the vocabulary and are surprising. both rhymes were unexpected and beautiful.

and those last two lines... they really struck me. such a sweet sentiment, that being lost is not the same as being forgotten. a truly solid piece. thank you for sharing!