Soul crusader

Soul crusader

A Poem by stars are far


Some people say 
Our friendship is fake 
Unbelieving that you are a good guy 
Lots of people 
Could say many words 
Raving while talking about you
Unusually feeling that you are a good friend 
Saying that you are great 
And that came from me 
Designing the best words to say 
Editing your name YAS to my poem
Raised it to be the best 

     

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
for my friend here YAS
I hope for you the best life
and i hope you like this :)

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Sooo good and deserved xoxoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, I'm so touched, and you are such a great friend. I could list all the superlatives that have ever existed, but it wouldn't do you justice :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A great structure and tribute to a man I'm coming to know as a true gentleman. Thank you for echoing what so many of us think.

And the poem on it's own? I like it a lot. A celebration of friendship, particulally in the cyber age we live in.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!!!! I love the format. You have added a great look to the poem. Well written. Nicely presented. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Tyre, Lebanon



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