I do love you

I do love you

A Poem by stars are far



Thousands of words should be said

To tell you what you mean to me …

One second can be enough

For me to sink in our eyes …

Billions of lives must be spent

For me to forget those beautiful eyes …

 

How could you believe that I forgot you ?

How could you think that I can ignore you ?

How could you feel that I will leave you ?

How could you believe that I don’t adore you ?

 

You really don’t know me

You need all your life to get my thoughts

You need a century to know me ..

 

I knew you from the first look

I can know what do you think of for your eyes

I can know what you want to do if I just look at you

 

But the only thing that I couldn’t knew

Why do  you hate me while I’m into you ?

Why you don’t think about me while this is the only thing that I do?

Why do you love yourself more than you love me ?

 

Don’t you know that you are my star

Don’t you know that you are my oxygen

Don’t you know that you are my soul

Don’t you know that you are my heart beat

Don’t you know that I’m in love with you

DON’T YOU KNOW THAT



I ADORE YOU

© 2011 stars are far


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It is just sensational just how you write such awesome love, heartbreak and romantic poems,

"Thousands of words should be said
To tell you what you mean to me …
One second can be enough
For me to sink in our eyes …
Billions of lives must be spent
For me to forget those beautiful eyes "

Just the beginning alone is so perfect and the rest carries it through. Top write again :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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very nice.... love it... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


sooo nicely romantic xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


More good words fro "Stars Are Far".
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


I do like this poem- well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Don’t you know that you are my oxygen ( and my carbon dioxide ) as when you kiss you breathe in their second hand breaths, I love the passionate way in which you tell him how you feel imploring him to know just how much he means to you. beautiful, keep em' coming ( out of curiousity how would the last line be written in Arabic? )

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so so so romantic!
Your poems are getting better sis

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet poem! With such great ending! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely..!!!!

Great shot..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love is a recurring motif with your writing, an you seem to be refining your technique over time. I like this - I hope the subject does too!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful, professional and with great flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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