A LONG-FORGOTTEN TUNE

                   A long-forgotten tune

                   Was it in a dream

                   that I heard it

                   last? 

                   A face of a stranger

                   Why does it seem

                   so familiar, so dear

                   to me 

                   now?                  

                
                   Who was I before we met -

                   I cannot recall
               
                   I am afraid to contemplate the reality

                   that confronts me                   

                   full force

                   I am afraid to accept the reality

                   of reality

                 
                   I felt it coming

 

 

                   The overpowering scent 

                   carried

                   from the days of tomorrow 

                   by the omnipotent wind of intuition                        

 

                   Enveloped in and drowned

                   by feelings that I cannot comprehend

                   I think we have met before

                   in a dream from my childhood

                   in that faraway land

 

Reviews

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True love is something that belongs to children; a marriage 'made in heaven' is when the lovers can be like children. Because children are pure and innocent ...

Steven

[Being.john.sweet~The Ev..]

the omnipotent wind, yeah thats good, as is the whole write, thank you for sharing this piece~take care~john

[Morgan A Lynch]

very nice flow to this.
i think we have met before in a dram from my childhood in that faraway land
great line my fav and so so true..

[MandarinOranges]

This has a wonderful flow to it.

I am afariad to accept the reality
of reality

No truer words have I ever before heard.

Excellent write!

[Bubo]

Or a life before this one...................
Nice flow, and one way to view finding our soul mate!

A face of a stranger
Why does it seem
so familiar, so dear
to me
now?

[Michey Sharp]

The visual image presented here is very powerful....great write.

[Shalini R]

i think there should be a sequal. i really want to know how this ends.

[Annelise]

This is so stunning, it sets such a mood. Every stanza is so personal, it's like reading a soul.

"I am afraid to accept the reality
of reality"

I love this stanza, I love all of them, but this is my favorite.

[Bella Marie]

This is so divine, I know this feeling, of knowing someone before, such a strong impression that is an actual physical feeling...and the question remain..."Have we met before".
I loved this, you mentioned that you write very spiritually...we this is...perfection.

I want to chose my fave stanza....but I cant, I love it all...this goes into my favorites folder.
Thankyou for a beautiful voice

Bella
XXX