Dust at a Glance

The halls glisten by and the trees whisper,

I wait to be with you and nearer -- clearer.

You're so far away, to far it seems,

When will I see your face gleam?

 

You travel all around,

Not a care that I have found.

Your spirit shines,

like the morning dew's rhymes.

 

The trees dance for you,

A melodic trance for you.

Do you dare stare?

What have you to care?

 

You trolly around -- like Fae,

hitting pubs on your way.

Will you take time to look?

I am your open book.

 

Look for me hear,

I always see you near.

But glance at the side,

I run by and by.

 

Have you taken time to see,

what you really mean to me.

Am I just another tree,

or may I feel you -- to be -- as free?

Author's Note

Wrote quickly, has a good solid meaning though. Can you follow it? Always love to hear your comments! Thanks!

Reviews

[melissa]

it was very clear very welll written i really enjoyed it:)

[Dark Twain]

This could easily be a song. Reminds me of some great Irish folk songs.

[prjctREdiscovery]

I like the rhyme pattern but the voice and meaning was clear and nice.