Three Words of Forever

Three Words of Forever

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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Just a piece of us...

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Dreams wisp by.
You grace me.
I dream you.
Here you stand.

Your love; real.
Your heart; pure.
Your soul; blessed.
Our love; strong.

What shall be?
Between us; me?
A love found,
wishful thinking gone.

Being alone? No!
Searching for none.
You are mine.
I am yours.

I will be
here with you.
Are you mine?
Your heart; given?

A glass walk,
it shatters asunder.
Our love? Yes!
It is glue.

Our hands; tender.
Your eyes; stunning.
Your passion; unending.
Our life; together...

             Forever.

© 2009 Brandee D. Hack


Author's Note

Brandee D. Hack
I wondered how using only three words would go. I cannot decide yet. Please Ignore grammar here. This is just an idea. =)

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I think this is a fabulous piece of work! I am not very into relationship/love based poetry; nature, history and philosophy are more my cup of tea. But this minimalist structure here is spot on and this flows wonderfully! The style reminds me of Kay Ryan's work. Kay was 16th Poet Laureate of the United States, just so you know to whose work yours is being compared. Huge Kudos on this piece!

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Very different. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think this is a fabulous piece of work! I am not very into relationship/love based poetry; nature, history and philosophy are more my cup of tea. But this minimalist structure here is spot on and this flows wonderfully! The style reminds me of Kay Ryan's work. Kay was 16th Poet Laureate of the United States, just so you know to whose work yours is being compared. Huge Kudos on this piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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