The Bee's of my Grandmum

The Bee's of my Grandmum

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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Just simple memories combined together.

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The Amber of the stone
resembles your love of warmth.
Like when lovers' arms are bedecked
with a beautiful treasure of pleasure's chest.

Yet everywhere I turn
I hear screams that frighten.
Mistaken children with bad
and depressing teachings.

I think that if only I could help
that it would be much better.
Just to know they understand
that live has it'd up's and down's.

"You never get what you want,"
or at least all the time.
My Grandmum always used to say,
"Life will be greener on other shore's."

I wish that throughout all these bad things
that I could help raise them.
Teach them of their past
and make them know what is write from wrong.

For today they act as devilish bugger's.
Only sweet when they have a plea.
Yet they need to know all the world
is not as sweet as the honey gathered by bee's.M

© 2009 Brandee D. Hack


Author's Note

Brandee D. Hack
I am Irish and some of the terms are slang or dialect differences. Please excuse those and if you do not understand, please ask. ;) Thanks!

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I enjoyed this write here. I am part Irish myself.
I thought it flowed well and I understood it.


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Brandee D. Hack
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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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