Strikingly Beautiful

Written by music... please enjoy!

How beautiful it seems to me

a dance we have begun to play,

Our heartbeats rest like her call

how the mind is strikingly beautiful.

Two ventures as one melody

how lovely it is to hear.

One piece of the wind humming

and guitars twisting their chords.

Then brisk whispers are intriguing

my love I feel your presence in here.

Show me what you will darling.

I beseech you. Take me still?

Beautiful melodies dance round this fire

as such a tune I am acustomed to. 

Reviews

[Y.F.]

I picture in my mind 2 lovers, dancing to the sound of the music, slowly caressing each other while being caressed by the music, in both body and mind.
The emotions are pouring out of this piece - one can feel your sincerity in them. :)

The flow and rhythm are greatly put, and you've know you've touched my heart with the subject.
Adding to library. :)

[Nate E. Flake (Cösmic ..]

...this poem paints a sweet melody in my mind!

[Edgar A Stonehill]

You have written a great romantic love poem.

So many poems about love are really tend to be about desperation, but yours is the real thing.