Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble II

Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble II

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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The more it seems I know you
the more you slip away.
Not because I am trying
but only for you cannot stay.

You found someone else
and now I am only a doll.
Something pretty to look at
nothing glorious at all.

The more I think of him
the truer this all seems.
He gives me a sense of warmth
and not your ugly speech.

I never wanted to kiss you
but you welcomed me in.
Now I want to take it back
all this hurt; adieu.

Because a friend came in
and gave me a spectacle of light.
I cannot turn my back
on his unending plight.

Yet nothing is going right
sometimes I seem a mess.
But all I want to do
I end my lover's quest.

A knight I seek is gentle,
a poet quite revered. 
But I do not know the power
in which my heart can yield.

I just need time to think
a friendship I foresee.
For in all this crazy mess
you have been my sea.

You are not my rebound 
to the basketball game.
But I don't want to break your heart
and it is with that, that I sway.

Time is just a simple clock
of number small and large.
It is unending in it's tale
so watch it bend and turn.

I need it to stand up again
to find what all I need.
All I have is in front of me,
with it, I take my leave.

© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


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A very good piece. I really like how you use basket ball as an analogy. Love is so hard and in the place that you less expect it. You will find it there waiting to be hold and caress. Make the right choice and fallow your heart. If you do that, you can never go wrong. Great job!!!Thanks for sharing!

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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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