Simple Complexities

A musical side of life.

If were a simple fiddle

what tune would i play?

Something of great complexity?

Or of daring, ventures great?

I ask myself so many times,

the heart that makes this beat.

Like simple tippers on the bodhran

A pretentious flame that I seek?

How bold must my words be

to fully make this take flight?

Upon the green, lush hills

a tale of deeds burns bright.

My mind filled with the sunlight

of charming melodies being played.

Of warming, comforting lush pastures

these cushions never seem to fade.

KEY NOTES:

*bodhran (bow-run) - an irish drum; looks similar to a tambourine

*tipper - what is used to hit the bodhran (irish drum)

Reviews

[ace]

excellently written you have great skill at giving ur poems a wonderful flow very well done

[xXx]

my first impression is the Simple Complexities are the Thoughts, just the containers of the more expressive, actual actions, complexities .. maybe a subset understanding, comprehension, intent of further acting upon ..

dare to break some strings Brandee

[Chirinos20]

great work here! This piece flows from beginning to end. It is a small poem, which makes me want to read it again. You have words that I don't know! In the same manner, you have the meaning to them. Well done!!!