Girl

Girl

A Poem by breakthebrokenone

Girl,
You deserve more
than a boy who makes you
feel like an option.

You deserve more
than arguments
tears
neglect
and sadness.

When you become a woman
you will thank me
for this small piece of advice
and you will call me
Friend.

© 2017 breakthebrokenone


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This indeed is a great advice, to all girls in general :) We sure deserve much respect than we normally get from the 'Make section' of our society.

I applaud you for writing this short yet powerful piece.And you sure are a great friend to me now, I'm already so grateful to have *smiles*

Happy writing!!😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This indeed is a great advice, to all girls in general :) We sure deserve much respect than we normally get from the 'Make section' of our society.

I applaud you for writing this short yet powerful piece.And you sure are a great friend to me now, I'm already so grateful to have *smiles*

Happy writing!!😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 15, 2017
Last Updated on September 15, 2017
Tags: Love, romance, heartbreak, break ups, girl, relationships, advice

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breakthebrokenone
breakthebrokenone

christchurch, canterbury, New Zealand



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I am 21. I would love to hear what my fellow poets think of my work. I post new work every second day. I have tattoos and love Leonard Cohen and Sylvia Plath. I listen to a lot of Lana Del Rey and I w.. more..

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