A new day

new day new opportunities

AAs the sun drunk the dew 

                                                                           As the birds woke and flew

As the morning breeze so softly blew

                                                                        The motherland had welcomed you

 The sky adorned herself too

 The fable day has arrived in holy faith so gracefully new 

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

positivity and happiness...a powerful combination...You put this across so well

[Latifa]

thank you dr.wood

[Angel]

This is breathtaking...

In your last line, did you mean "fabled day' and 'holy faith"??

I love this poem!

[Latifa]

i meant that it could be a new legendary day holding in it's pocket a great hope and faith to make you believe
and thank you for the lovely review dear you hade draw a great grin on my face

[Angel]

Each and every day holds in it's pocket great and wonderful gifts from our Father, Who loves us.
read moreEach and every day holds in it's pocket great and wonderful gifts from our Father, Who loves us.
Amen...

[ron]

This is a lovely poem Latia. I hope your days are as beautiful.

[Latifa]

thank you fellow poet for your lovely words

[ron]

You are most welcome. xo

[Sami Khalil]

I love your writes and the real positive messages within. Keep it up dear poet...Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you sami you had just made my day

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[OTownPete]

Such lovely sentiments are expressed in this piece with a different kind of form. Your friend in words, Pete

[Latifa]

thank you pete for your kind words

[Neon]

Am feeling so cool reading this poem. A great refreshing feel comes right from your heart through this piece that makes everything refresh ... lovely poem. What a great Morning Breeze ... beautiful theme.

[Latifa]

thank you neon for taking the time and reading it

[Neon]

Pleasure ... every new day's a new opportunity .. i got this point. Everybody should start the day with a great refresh.. with the cool deep breeze of sunshine ... with the coldness of air .. without the smoothness of voices of birds... because everynew day comes with some new things to do ... and we makeour day and life beautiful if we get this opportunity to :)

[Latifa]

YEP IT IS WHAT I MEANT WITH THIS PIECE