Finally I can rhyme

Finally I can rhyme

A Poem by Latifa
"

with GOD's guidance and blessings I am better now.

"

I glide from the rainbows of the heavenly skies

 with my heart's strings

rhyming with the flute of serenity

I am joyful

I am greatful

finally I can rhyme

with the flute of serenity

the shadows stripped

 to show me insight

the winds sung me a lullaby

 to guide me to the light

my castles are in the air

standing on the pillars of survival

on the pillars of love

and so I glide from the rainbows of the heavenly skies

 with my heart's strings

rhyming with the flute of serenity

© 2014 Latifa


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DrD
I love how you manimpulate words. You must be dangerous with men. But you capture me with these lines and themes and the way you harmonize them all into something of beauty. This certainly was no exception and I read it twice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you dear David for your lovely review,they're taking by the heart within and I appreciate them.. read more
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DrD
Latifa, you are dangeorusly inventive with a marvelous imagination. You would be a greaat poet in the age when poetry still mattered and the public had enough culture to appreciate it. There is something not only classical about your writing, but about you as well. It all becomes so obvious in your word selecton and combinations. I enjoyed this one very mcuh but then I enjoy all you do.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

oh my GOD, thank you so much dear David for your kind words, this is very encouraging and it will ke.. read more
Flute of serenity is worth the price of admission. I envy those who can rhyme. Very good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you once again friend.
and so I glide from the rainbows of the heavenly skies
with my heart's strings
rhyming with the flute of serenity

Beautiful and inspirational.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thank you for the read.
A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like poetry with hope and faith. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I thought you would be rhyming in this but nevertheless I loved it.

'greatful' should be 'grateful'

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery, and I love the idea of the 'flute of serenity.'

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thought this one was going to actually be about rhyming, pleasantly surprised, rhyming with serenity, it doesn't get better than that, sweet read.

I am 'grateful'

Posted 7 Years Ago


and so I glide from the rainbows of the
heavenly skies
with my heart's strings
rhyming with the flute of serenity.

Great poetry dear. I am enjoying this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Like this too...good job, well done..

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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