those stones

those stones

A Poem by Latifa

The waves have made a pact with the  stones,

You stand still.

While I’ll caress you with my  foamy ripples of love and care.

Just stand still and grab your fist to the ground.

The moon peeked  at the pact scene

From up, he declared :

You stand still and

I’ll cover you with that foamy blanket of love and care.

The waves winked at the moon :

“Thanks for the help uncle !”

We all love those stones,

We all love those shores.

The shores of   the land.

Our beloved land

© 2015 Latifa

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lovely poem. I love the the imagery and "the waves winked at the moon" line. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Stones remind me of characters that outlived gruesome times

The shores of the land

Really quite an exquisite work of art

Posted 7 Years Ago

"Foamy blanket of love and care"

Damn.. I wish I came up with that.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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I really like the first line!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Visualizing it so clearly..
Those stones are lovable.
Great one friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago

amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 8 Years Ago

stasis and motion, the ebb and flow of tides and emotion - liked the wink to the moon. Well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago

It is a very original and beautiful pact between the wave and the stone. You have a nice imagination.

Posted 8 Years Ago

"You stand still.
While I’ll caress you with my foamy ripples of love and care."

Awesome words my friend... thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

How your words awaken the world and enrich it with such vibrant visions! This loving glimpse at an ocean of loving is pure and precious to heart and soul, dear Latifa.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

thank you dearly Craig :)

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Added on August 30, 2015
Last Updated on August 30, 2015



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