Tell me you love me

Tell me you love me

A Poem by Briony Bryant

If I turned my skin inside out
Let all my guts spill on your floor
Heart pumping out my chest
Would you still find me pretty?
Could you clean the mess? 

© 2013 Briony Bryant


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Briony Bryant
love & appreciate any comments, thank you for reading!

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Powerful emotion and question. I like the visions and wants of the words. You open the door to vision and the need for more description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's just a well defined a creative write which's filled with the questions... i loved how you expressed your ways to let everyone know about the your theme. I love how you just converted the words of poetry into the poem. Creatively penned write. Well, everyone'd love you if you've a nice heart who's filled with Mercy for everyone. That's all i got from the piece. Well done, Nicely penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Briony Bryant

10 Years Ago

Thank-you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Horizons

10 Years Ago

Welcome! Btw, can i ask, is this a real write which's came from your life? mind if i ask?
Briony Bryant

10 Years Ago

Everything that I write is raw and inspired from very real emotions that I've experienced and felt. .. read more
THE TRANSITION OF THIS PIECE...THE BEAUTY OF IT ALL IS ON THE INSIDE...DOES NOT MATTER IF ITS UGLY OR PRETTY...MATTERS ONLY HOW YOU PERCEIVE THE PERSON IN YOUR LIFE...CLEANING THE MESS IS LIKE GROWING OLD WITH SOMEONE...GOING THE DISTANCE...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Briony Bryant

10 Years Ago

Thank-you for reading! I appreciate your comments!
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

You're welcome...good to read your work...

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Added on September 11, 2013
Last Updated on September 23, 2013
Tags: free verse

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Briony Bryant
Briony Bryant

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