4 in the morning

I think I want you the most at 4 in the morning,

When I'm still half asleep reaching for my sheets

And the moonlight has lit my room enough

That I notice the empty space beside me.

I like to imagine you there,

With your arms around me,

My head against your chest,

Our feet tangled together.

And during that 4 in the morning,

Still half asleep,

You would reach for me

And I would reach back.

That morning I realized it's more than wanting you beside me,

But wanting you to know all your favourite things

And your flaws.

I want to love you.

Reviews

[nattibabe]

I'm becoming mildly obsessed with your writing. (Hopefully that wasn't creepy..haha) I'v never been one to love poetry, mainly cause I suck at writing it, but your writing is beautiful and so relatable. Especially for girls our age going through the hardships in dating and breakups. Keep up the great work!

-n.b.

[Briony Bryant]

Haha aw thank you! Wasn't creepy at all! This comment made my day and makes me want to write more! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for reading love!

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Very good write! Think most of us seen those feelings are there by far awesome!

[Briony Bryant]

Thank-you!

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your very welcome

[Horizons]

A true crucifixion of love in the poem you've demonstrated. Well structured piece of writing came from your heart. The desire of love in the morning is what you've shown through the piece, what you want to stay always happy with love you've shown, love's what that makes you always happy you've constructed well, you want just love and love A true love that put you into the world of peace where hate and pain couldn't reach you and couldn't grab your happiness from your hands, that's all i got. Beautifully inked, well penned write.

[Briony Bryant]

Thank-you!!!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You’ve got a fascinating premise here, and even more fascinating implications.

Overall, truly impressive.

[Briony Bryant]

Thank-you so much, glad you liked it!