July '16

Written quickly in the notepad on my phone on the top of a mountain somewhere out West.

It's on top of these mountains

Where I feel myself breathe

It's inside of your eyes

When I can finally see

This is forever

And forever we'll be

This is now

And now we are free

Reviews

[mercy party]

nice picture i get in my mind from this poem. When i was young we used to go to a place high in the Mountains of Colorado. It was our spot, we called it The Top of the World. You describe the mountains simply well.

[J. Atkinson]

Wonderful rhythm and cadence. Love it! :)

[Brittany Carpenter]

Wow, thank you!