my love

the moment i saw your eyes
i knew it was meant to be
then it started me by surprise
when you looked at me

your real and here
i cant let go of you
you are the one my dear
together we are one not two

your eyes are blue
like the sky above
if it wasnt for you
i would not find love

your gold blonde hair
your soft white skin
your crystal blue stare
and your perfect white grin

your the one and only
cant you see
i have been waiting so lonely
for the one for me

we will always be together
its just how i feel
ill be with you forever
you and me are real

Reviews

[Chantavong]

i love how it flows. great piece!

[Caleb Benton]

Very good poem. I like how you made the reader see what you see and feel how you feel. Good job.

[ATG]

One word. AAAWWWW!!!

This was a very sweet poem. You got off the emotions in the poem perfectly. I enjoyed reading this.

[Ally Baker]

This wasa cute piece which was cleverly written. Good write!

~~Ally Baker
"Don't upset the writer. She might put you in one of her books and kill you."