Anxiety

Eyes connecting with such fierce
Lips tingling with the sensation of your lips 2 inches from mine
Breath quickening with such insanity I feel like I'll faint
Heart thumping at the speed of light I'll feel like I'll burst

I can hear thunder in your chest
I can see a blazing sun in your eyes
I can feel a cool strong breeze on my lips
I can taste the freshness of your breath

Your trembling hand gently glides across my flushed cheek
Your lips move up forming a smile I will dream about forever
Your swirls of caramel are locked onto my emerald green
Your strong arms pull me closer to your anxious body

You move closer with such caution that I cant take the anxiety
The heat between us is growing stronger and stronger
Your lips move closer to mine and I feel your breath tickling mine
For 5 seconds the world stopped moving and I realized I'm in love

Reviews

[Vertigo]

wow beautifully written

[Kelley Quinn]

Wow that is amazing. Such inspiration. now that is the way to describe what it feels like to be in love.

[Red Ears]

Aw love the end

[Charlie]

i like the third stanza,i think the first needs a little work but there`s definately promise,you have somethin there.this is very descriptive and all in all a good poem. :D