Wasn't Fate

Locked inside this dark tower
Searching for the light
A black hole is laughing its way in
Nothing seems to go right

Darkness crawls in the air
It's got a hold on me
Nothing can pull me out
Of all this insanity

Can't you see I'm falling apart
From my heart broken
Can't you see I'm lost inside
There's no way out I'm hopeless

A part of me won't ever heal
Your love was my escape
From the cruel world, but now that's gone
Guess it wasn't fate

Reviews

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

interesting. i agree with the others ever thought of writing songs?

[Vertigo]

hmm heart breaking

[Stefannie]

I love the way your wrote this one .... I could totally relate , It beautiful and heart breaking.

[KisuKimmi]

in the first stanza, i think the words would flow better if you just had the last line as "nothing seems right" instead of "nothing seems to go right" but other than that, i really like it ^.^

[alice grant]

i agree with your other reviewer, it sounds like it could be a song. i like it.

[Haru]

This is pretty. Almost sounds like a musical art. I like it.