That Girl

God, i want to be her.

I want to be that girl,

that girl who he remembers everything about,

every detail,

every fear,

every story,

every favorite.

I want to be that girl, he can never forget.

 

I want to be that girl,

who he falls asleep thinking about,

and who he calls in the middle of the night,

just to hear her voice,

That girl,

who's picture he continually stares at,

thinking of her name over and over in his head,

I want to be that girl he can't stop thinking about.

 

I want to be that girl,

who he never wants to upset,

who he's completely over protective of,

and who he never wants to hurt.

I want to be that girl he's so scared to lose.

 

I want to be that girl,

who he misses only a couple minutes after leaving her,

and he'll drop everything, just to be with her.

That girl,

he'll do anything for, just to make her happy.

I want to be that girl he can't live without.

 

Author's Note

ha. came to me. DAVE HELPED! (go dave) haha
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Reviews

[LostCauze[:P]]

A really sweet poem, creative and descriptive. I really like the font and the structure of the poem, it adds onto the innocence of the poem. Great write...keep on writing.

[youngwriter222]

I think every girl wants to be "that girl" who that one boy notices and you are his whole world. You just want to be with your dream guy. I wish we could all be "that girl".

Nice poem, it is really good

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. The flow is great. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Jeff Loquist]

And the girl every guy wants to find but fears.

[Becca :)]

this is really good. don't we all wish that sometimes? nice work. =]

[Mirth]

... Yeah. Who doesn't want to be that girl. Even worse when it's reverse situation, and you're the one remembering every detail, dropping everything, & he can't be bothered to recall what you said last night...

Obviously, obviously, this is something I like. Can relate to. This is the sort of thing that gets blown up huge by girls like me all over myspace and is whored out and dolled up until you can't recognize it anymore. It's beautiful, easy to relate to. Very, very nice.

Ahh. Now my chest hurts. I blame you.