A Different Story

A different story

A different time

Much to cheerful

To happen in mine

 

Cinderella’s slippers

Don’t fit my feet

No mask to wear

No prince to meet

 

No Fairy Godmother

To turn rags to a gown

And my pumpkin carriage

Is nowhere to be found

 

No magical resolution

To end my misery

No prince

Would ever kiss me

 

No happy ever after

Will be allowed

My destiny

Is the same as now

Reviews

[Xyxyshsbbxhx]

This was a nice read. It felt as if I was there with you and could feel your emotions. I love how you compared Cinderella with this. Just beautiful.

[Pencrafter]

Your poem has a wonderful simplicity to it, and conjures some colorful mental images. We are soul mates because I can't spell either. Just a couple of suggestions: The third line of the first verse, change 'to' into 'too'. And in the fourth verse change 'resolution' to 'solution'. Or leave it. No big deal. You have a good imagination and ability to transfer your thoughts into text.

[Sophie]

I really like this poem, but if you're actually talking about urself NOT TRUE!
okay, that is all :P great poem :D

[Ali]

This is a great poem. I love the rhythm it has.

[msJ]

love this poem.