Beautiful

you read Henry Miller aloud

legs wrapped around me like a boa

at first I was shy

but you took me

by surprise

passionate eyes

locked in

your little red panties

adorned my couch

lips locked 

silent embrace

we move slowly

in a trance

a beautiful dance

in the night

Reviews

[_mal]

So beautiful, I love the way each line ties into the nest

[sienikeha]

nice . henry miller needs to be read aloud!

[Bruce]

thanks Amanda, I was thinking about being more graphic, but I didn't feel it was necessary in this piece

[Manda A.]

I feel like there's something missing from this piece... but I like it.

[Bruce]

thank you Hotwater, I had a great muse once

[Hotwater]

Sexy write, vivid description... with enough left for the imagination. Good work.
*bird*