The Great Football Match

The Great Football Match

A Poem by Phil Sanders
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A poem for children

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The lads went out for football
On a sunny Summer’s day
Iain and Fred, Bill and Dick
The greatest game to play
They tossed their jumpers on the ground
The goalposts for to make
And Billy’s Mom had packed for them
A big fat Angel Cake
They ran around for half an hour
The ball flew here and there
Enjoying every shot and save
They didn’t have a care
But then, alas, a shot from Fred
Flew past the woolly post
And hit the fence and shot across …
To the house of Mr.Most!!
It landed in his garden there
Amongst his prize new flowers
The last time that it landed there …
He kept the ball for hours!!
They lined up by the wall outside
To see who’d ring the bell
And speak to angry Mr.Most
Of the sorry tale to tell
Well, Billy it was who said he’d go
Because he knew the thing to take
He swapped the ball with Mr.Most
For his Mom’s great Angel Cake!!!

© 2008 Phil Sanders


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A fantastic fun write Phil - full of excitement and truth - kids behave like this ....
So different to what I've read from you in the past - a delightful suprise.

A good giggle from me.........

cheers

jen-JG

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun read, great imagery. wondefully written and creative.


Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely and light like an Angel Cake. Very enjoyable. The interface between serious adults and carefree kids.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great my friend, as a mother of a football playing teenager it has all the right elements, every single one right down to the cake! Truly a great and fun write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahahah!!!, this is lovely Phil, the child in me is laughing along, I have to admit I saw the title and thought oh no he's written about football....... oh well here goes........ I am so glad I decided to read anyway, it is delightful, it took me right back to my childhood and playing rounders in the street, we'd lose the ball in a garden and argue over who would knock the door to get the ball back......I am sure my little nephews would love this story

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phil Sanders
Phil Sanders

Rochester, Kent, United Kingdom



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I am a part time photographer and poet when I am not earning my normal crust. I live in Kent in the UK in a little village called Upnor which is right on the River Medway. I love photographing sunris.. more..

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