Savour the Moonlight

Savour the Moonlight

A Poem by bryantvh
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A glimpse into the state of unconsciousness. A glimpse into the moonlight

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Where on earth am I?
I thought as I lie.
Is it the end?
Which part did it rend?
It hurts so much,
Hell at every touch.
Am I in darkness?
The strength that I harness,
can only get me through,
to lift a finger or two.
My memories are vague, 
As fragile as an egg.
Even then I sense hope, 
No reasons to mope.
I struggle to fight,
to savour the moonlight.
I lie as I cry,
Where on earth am I?

© 2014 bryantvh


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This is great, I can truly relate. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


bryantvh

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! =)
Ars Goetia Poetry

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
This is very good poem for someone who feels lost, it has a good sense of hope and struggle to get out of a tough situation, its a really good peice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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bryantvh

10 Years Ago

Thanks :) love your works too!

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Added on February 25, 2014
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bryantvh

Puchong Jaya, Selangor, Malaysia



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A writing and reading enthusiast. Someone who simply enjoys the privilege of having the ability to interpret lines of words into pictures and paintings of masterpieces. A big fan of Stephen King and a.. more..

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