It's Not Too Complex

21st poem

So here I am
Sitting here with you
Wondering what to do
Thinking of something new

It's lingering in my head
It just wont go away
I'm not going to wait another day
Is that okay?

Why not try it?
It's not too complex
Who cares about the effects?
Lets have sex!

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

I love: Warning:
This poem is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for those under the age of 18. And you, my friend, are only 14!! Not old enough to read your own writing, now that's just wrong!! lol
Anyhow.....This is a good poem, universal theme, good rhymes....
Who cares about the effects?
Lets have sex!

[James Lyons]

i actually cried, this was beautiful

[Sweet Solitude]

Um... Wow? I like it. It's weird, at least for me. And kind of blunt (I think that's the word). But I like it. It's cool.

Brittany