Thoughts from Beyond

Thoughts from Beyond

A Poem by EMMIE

I was made to bathe in fire 
And not burn 
I was made to fall off the edge 
And not crack 
I was made to hunt with sharks 
And not drown 
                 .   .   .  I was made to lead the free world  .   .   . 
If only I .   .   .  
                                          Didn't pull the trigger .   .   .   

© 2017 EMMIE

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The ending is true dear Emmie. When we give-in or give-up. We are done. Powerful use of words and thoughts. You made the reader listen and believe. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful work you have here. It says alot about what it means to be human and how we search for the right thing to do.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the idea you had for this write. All of the guns in this world will never bring peace. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on March 7, 2017
Last Updated on March 7, 2017

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