10_word challenge with Tovli!

 

KEYS PERMISSION

CONSPIRACIES TOWER

NIGHT GOING NOWHERE

CHASMS THROTTLE EVENING

by

Ray Hamilton

{ Not a Poet and I know It }

July 14th 2008

Author's Note

Being a not a poet I don't know what I'm doing LOL
Makes sense to me what do you think?
But what do I know LOL

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

This to me sounds like the life of a business man living
in a big city...no rest for the weary. This is very descriptive.
AD

[Laura E. Aranda]

I can't wait to read the rest of your work. I like the comical style you write in. Please if you have time go checkout my featured poem. Thank you!
Cheers, lea

[Valentine]

The first three lines made sense..but I did not see the contest if this is for one and wonder how everyone else might have fared with the same words..Me I would not have done as well as this I am afraid..God bless..Valentine

[Fran Marie]

A Cleverly Crafted piece~here Ray~ with great use of the 10 words straight away~

WeLL DonE! my friend~Fran

[angelina neves]

Uau! i love it!
- and what is a poem but a message made with some choosen words?! :)

[angelinmypocket]

At first glance, one would have to stop and read this over again to anylize the meaning,
but there definitly is a message in it. How very clever you are to fashion this message
with only the ten words. Bravo!
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[Helena]

Makes perfect sense to me Ray! What a brilliant little piece, it almost read
like an acrostic. Very original and creative using all the 10 words in one hit!

Thanks again for your participation in Tovli's contest, your muse is obviously
fired up.....you still have one more entry you can submit! :)


Helena