I miss...

I miss...

A Poem by Caddie O'brien

A scent

An expression

A color combination

or a joke you once told retold to me by someone else

All of these things and more

can produce a sharp burning feeling

in my soul.

 

I miss the good

but I cannot return

I miss the good

but I can't allow a second chance

 

I must take care of me first

and when we were together

I was always last.

© 2008 Caddie O'brien


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Poignant lyrics; nothing extra, only the sentiments that pertain to the lost love. Very good.

You have nice precision in your writing.

Daniel

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Caddie O'brien
Caddie O'brien

DFW, TX



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I live in Texas but my heart belongs to the state of RI. Once a girl by the shore, always a girl by the shore. I have always written for me and hope to one day be able to truly dedicate time to rea.. more..

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