Looking into the heart

You come home from work, I can see you had a bad day

The bags under you eyes say it all

My mother, I look into you heart and it all fades away  

My brother, who seldom let’s his feeling’s show

all though I am older then you  

you have taught me so much about living my life

I look into your heart and see a sense of adventure

My father i aspire to be like you

with a sense of responsibility, and a good hardworking nature

I know you would never let our family down

I look into your heart and see nothing but love

Looking into a heart is looking into a life

and you can see who I have become

by only just taking a peek

of my family's hearts  

Reviews

[Omegax45]

This is very deep. I can see how weel the narrator examines his family and sees the good in them. Very well done.

[Sunflower 20]

very well said. the flow seemed effortless in this peice, your really improving. well done! :)

[Lily Mae]

And beautiful hearts they are.. all of them :) thank you for sharing..x