A Familiar Reflection

A Familiar Reflection

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing

just a story of some sort.


I look in the mirror

And all i can see

is a girl

A girl that seems to be

Broken hearted and confused

I can tell she's in agony

I look into her eyes

And i ccan hear her plea

A tear streams down her cheek

All she wants is to be set free

I can feel her pain

Begin to spread throughout my body

She then holds her hand out

A bit of fear comes over me

All of a sudden the mirror shatters

Into millions of pieces

And now i know

That girl will never be happy

© 2011 Ashli The Amazing

Author's Note

Ashli The Amazing
she's not happy now and never will be happy....or maybe she will who knows really?

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I canb very much so relate to this poem, very well written write

Posted 13 Years Ago

i like this one... you never know for sure...

Posted 13 Years Ago

You can't know for sure...never is so black and white...there is always room for the possibility of healing and growth, always!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. I can relate to it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Good work!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

i love it!!! esspesially the,All she wants is to be set free, yea its uber good!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

What's a nice poem~

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on June 4, 2011
Last Updated on June 18, 2011


Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA

Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..


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