My Moment

My Moment

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing
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A moment i will always treasure forever and ever.

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All my life i believed i was ugly

Until that day

You said i was pretty and i contain inside true beauty

Now you got my heartbeat drummin' away

That's one day i'll never regret

Even when i'm dead and gone

I could never forget

That day you made me feel like i was someone.

© 2011 Ashli The Amazing


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Ashli The Amazing
My moment for life.

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as always, great poem(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


awwwww! :) llllllllllllllllllluuuuurrrrrvvvvvveeee iiiiiitttt!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so sweet. You're amazing at writing poems. All I can say is I'm still waiting for my moment. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know how you feel, sometimes its hard to look past appearances because of other people. We have to take that back. A very heart warming poem, that was so beautiful. Outstanding.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is so important to look past outer appearances, because the most beautiful thing about beautiful people are the treasures that lie within. Very nice poem, heart warming and beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very heartfelt poem...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can really relate to this (: I know how you feel, and this reminds me so much of my moment. I love this

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 12, 2011
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Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA



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Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..

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