There is nothing more of a Garbage

There is nothing more of a Garbage

A Poem by captain

There is nothing more of a Garbage

 

But how could you see something in me if all you see is trash.

There will always be a use for me to help.

For you to grow, for me to flourish.

It’s a win, win situation if your just open to possibilities.

 

© 2013 captain


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I so much loved the opening line.. I am in midst of people who, all they can see is flaws and comment on how wrong or funny the other is, which puts me at discomfort..

There is a strength and confidence in those words that takes a bold step in altering the perspective of others with a slight pinch.. I think I would write it down on my note and read everytime I am being pulled down by random idiots! :P

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I feel honored that you find some comfort on this piece. This is also what I would tell t.. read more



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"There is nothing more of a Garbage

But how could you see something in me if all you see is trash.
There will always be a use for me to help.
For you to grow, for me to flourish.
It’s a win, win situation if your just open to possibilities."


Posted 5 Years Ago


I certainly relate here. I have been pushed aside my whole life even though I can truly help and helping is something I am just meant to do. thank you for the down to earth real writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Kasey... Its hard being treated that way, but I learned to survive it and stay strong des.. read more
positive out look will win the day, if I am trash: then what are you?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

I am just one of many, the trash amongs the crowd, someday, the positive outlook will come, thank yo.. read more
paul sal.....

6 Years Ago

I doubt you are trash, leave the negativity by the curb and sail on the wind...............I am paul
captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Paul. Its good to hear a friend would say that to me.
I loved this and disliked it at the same time. Love it because it is a wonderful little piece of poetry that speaks volumes about the way people are treated today. A lot of people can relate to this, myself included. I dislikes it because even though I know there is ugly int he world I hate the thought that someone could treat another such as this. It disgusts me.

The little bright side to this concept is that the people who belittle us, talk us down, bully and criticize us are often the ones who are most jealous and envious. People who go through the trouble to put us through hell are usually trying to make themselves look and feel better because ins one way we threaten them. It is still sad though, and no amount of reassuring words will make us for that.

All in all it is a wonderful piece, though on the surface it seems a bit depressing the point you really get across is that we are all useful, in some way, large or small. All it takes is a little effort to see it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

How much your heart speaks is uplifting, I am very grateful with that. Often times I have so little .. read more
Like the saying goes: Some people's trash are other's treasure...Trash can be recycled and some can turn into fertilizers for the soil...I felt that person is being so judgemental of you without appreciating you...A wonderful poem...:).................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Some people's trash are other's treasure, I like that, people are judgemental in nature, it's just t.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

No problem...Look on the bright side I guess. Take care...:).........
Hope is a chance to be more than you were.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir Chris. Yes, Indeed that's what I am holding into in life.
I so much loved the opening line.. I am in midst of people who, all they can see is flaws and comment on how wrong or funny the other is, which puts me at discomfort..

There is a strength and confidence in those words that takes a bold step in altering the perspective of others with a slight pinch.. I think I would write it down on my note and read everytime I am being pulled down by random idiots! :P

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I feel honored that you find some comfort on this piece. This is also what I would tell t.. read more
there is a saying " one mans trash is another mans treasure" ….but a human is always a treasure..never trash.. I winch to hear the word garbage in reference to any human…

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Being invisible, alone and a trash. It's hard to live this life, but I do survive. Thank you, Renee... read more
Renée

6 Years Ago

Keep writing Dear Captain
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Pax
You are more than that Captain, be strong and keep winning that win, win situations...

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

captain

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Pax.
Its your win win poem captain.
Successful indeed...
Thanks for sharing ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Laminators Dubai

6 Years Ago

Thank you barbie ^^!
Laminators Dubai

6 Years Ago

That "barbie" just came out.
captain

6 Years Ago

lol, a pleasure!

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