Ceramic Gestures...

Ceramic Gestures...

A Poem by Carlouse

     Our lives lived in sin...Mistakes and glory...we deface an recreate those of gentle nature...The sky yurns...it screams...agony enlightens us of your simple existence...Ceramic plastered across your face...it takes shape of an evil...so sickening...a smile...happiness, refined so well...the time passes and the tears that flowed yesterday...float in he wind...the spark of sorrow reminds me of...you your smile, yur eyes...simply you...smeared across the landscape like the blood from these scars...repition...my only friend...these words, mean nothing like they did wen you spoke them...the genre dull but not short of a punch line...

© 2010 Carlouse


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Wow

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There is a lot of pain in this work...it's not hard to feel the anguish portrayed. Vibrant descriptions and well thought out analogies.

Watch the spelling - it takes away from the message.

Good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Carlouse
Carlouse

Omaha Nebraska, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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