Superman...

Superman...

A Poem by Carlouse

    
His life is a lie,his labels divine...The truth he lives lies in the tone of the beholder...i gaze above at the sight of trouble he skips across the sky and no one can deny...that hes your hero...by day he flies and by night he cries the thought of his presence becomes obscene...a joke at the most...for truth and justice fail us all... In a million lies there lives a truth..caressed in one word...jealousy, try as i may...i cant illuminate your face with the glory you hold towards him...given wings i cant take flight into your mind, let alone your heart...

© 2010 Carlouse


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Carlouse - this could actually be anybody's Superman! You have definitely created something that is quite thought provoking for anyone we place on a pedestal. The Hero being a Superman! Very nice! I wish you would consider this piece written in a different format (for visual sakes). Thank you for sharing this with us. Watch your punctuation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Carlouse - this could actually be anybody's Superman! You have definitely created something that is quite thought provoking for anyone we place on a pedestal. The Hero being a Superman! Very nice! I wish you would consider this piece written in a different format (for visual sakes). Thank you for sharing this with us. Watch your punctuation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Carlouse
Carlouse

Omaha Nebraska, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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I write to live and live to write...and i like b***s...alot...but yeah get to knnow me ;) more..

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