only yesterday was the time of our lives

The harsh reality of you being gone hits me like a hard blow to the stomach every time the thought of it crosses my worried filled brain . Not only where you my boyfriend we had a beautiful friendship that not even the most talented author could describe clearly enough .You made me feel  happiness and love  in a world full of mishaps and tragedies .You've been gone now for far too long but every time I get to see that angelic face of yours I can feel the connection still strong as ever like two opposite sides of a magnet being pulled together .  Love is a four letter word that you defined without any words better than than any definition in a dictionary . Now that your gone its hard to find meaning in this harsh cold world again , finding a place to belong seems to be becoming a more difficult task as the days without you go by . I'll never forget you in a million years for you will always have the most special profound place in my heart as my first love and my true best friend .

Author's Note

honest reviews would be nice , I am completely open to constructive criticism

Reviews

[Sacha Davison]

The first sentence needs some revising. It feels too long.
*were, comma after boyfriend, also a transitional word might be needed after boyfriend,
comma after long (put a comma before transitional words more often than not), "- still strong as ever - " might be more effective,
either a comma or semi-colon could go between "words" and better"
you're* gone, comma after gone, it's* for "it is" , start a new sentence with Finding, i suggest a changing "more difficult" to something synonymous, possibly a comma after task,
comma after years, comma after special, comma after heart

Obviously you wrote this when you were very emotional. I'm sorry for the way everything had to be "Maya". I'm glad you are using writing as a vent! I will see you at school in January! :)