Access Blocked By Fallen Rocks

This beach I've learned is out of reach,

its access blocked by fallen rocks.

No more will I enjoy the scene

of children on a summer day,

at play with shells on fine white sand.

Nor will I see them paddle there,

collect salt water in a pail.

Sail their boats where tides creep in and

hear them spin their fantasies of

stately galleons out at sea.

This loss, though sore, does not compare.

I shared this place where I would chat

with Dad, on all things this and that.

We'd walk and talk quite happily,

far greater is this loss to me.

Reviews

[Rama]

Chris,
Quite a natural expression of the loss of the means of fun!
Rama

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Rama. Yes this loss felt deeply, as it had been a much frequented place our family would visit over the years.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Access blocked...to those we love and treasure so much. That chasm is so deep and uncrossed, the block so impassable. The fallen earthly rocks may be cleared some day yet not this. I also loved picturing from your words, the idyllic childhood sunny moments at the sea. Memories to last a lifetime. I’m glad I could reflect on all of it today, Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

Good very early morning Ditzy from me. I should still be sleeping but....I love your review because as you rightly say, it isn't just the fallen rocks doing the blocking here. It is death itself preventing us from accessing those we love. Spot on with your insight here. You are a clever little cat.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Good Morning Chris!
Must be quite early morning by UK time indeed! I hope not too chilly there! Wishing you a happy and cozy day! Always a pleasure to stop by! :)

[Chris Shaw]

Just coming up to 6.00am. and unusually mild for November. What time is it for you? Always good to have my daily fix of kitty :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

We’re at about 11:30 AM Indian time Chris. Most of the morning stuff is done and I’m almost looking forward to lunch. :)

I’m glad the day it’s a mild day for November!

[Chris Shaw]

Enjoy your lunch :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Sure Chris! You have a lovely morning and a great day too ! :)

[Chris Shaw]

:))...... thank you

[Papaya]

I found the title of the poem so intriguing and how beautiful it is Chris.
Your father surfacing again in your poetry. How he would feel to read these...
So warmed I imagine.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ana. Those two poems were written years apart, but that just goes to show he is still with me in spirit. Your response very much appreciated.

Chris

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

There are times I feel like they are slicing away at our solitude...corralling us into chaotic circles...though I know it is just the changing of our world and the realization of things that did not really apply to our generation of growing. I love that your poems come across as simple thoughts and memories and spand into great and thought filled circumstance. Bravo Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Queenie for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Chris

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

Christine, I love your play with words in this wonderful rhyming poem. The images actually jump from the page and I feel as if I'm there at the scene. Great writing! :)

[Chris Shaw]

Tamara, thank you for your kind response. Happy to see you on my page.

Chris

[Dave]

It isn't just the beach, is it? As a child there was a sandlot just a short distance from our home. We played softball, soccer a myriad of games there, but no more. The sandlot is gone, in its' place a parking garage. So much of what we knew and loved is being taken away from , not only us, but our children.

Take care - before its' all gone - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

You are so right. It's not just the beach, but all those memories over the years. Thank you Dave.read moreYou are so right. It's not just the beach, but all those memories over the years. Thank you Dave.

Chris

[alanwgraham]

Very thoughtful Chris. I like when you move from the everyday into matters of portent or memories. I know that as I get older places often bring back memories and these often slip into some writing. Our memories are personal but they resonate strongly with others as yours has here.
Well done!
Regards.
Alan

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Alan for your thoughtful response. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

[peter Duggan]

Such wonderful memories you have brought back here Chris. I have not had very many childhood memories of the place I lived In, I detested London town and I guess I always will. I enjoyed your poem, my friend...Peter

[Chris Shaw]

It's sad if you haven't got many happy memories of childhood Peter. I'm so pleased I was able to give you some enjoyment with my lines. All good wishes to you

Chris

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Soft poetic reflection of memorable moments; the place may have lost it's access, but what remains in your heart is still intact and accessible at all times - nice write and wonderful read - :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Phill. Yes my memories stronger, than falling rocks in this case. I appreciate your visit.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

This could mean many things. I admire that about you; you're not obvious but you still have something relevant to communicate.

You have a pleasant style (well, maybe a little contrived) and you don't draw things out.

Most people don't make sense when they emotionally layer things.
("most people" includes myself)

Anyway, it sounds like you had an awesome dad.

[Chris Shaw]

We certainly agree that I had an awesome Dad, David. Thank you for your visit. Good to see you call.

Chris