Mind Corridors

Mind Corridors

A Poem by Chris

in darkest corners
cobwebs remain unshaken
tears trapped like dead flies

© 2021 Chris


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dang .. the Cafe' is presenting senryu today. just started my visits and already two out of three .. this one is super dark and all i can think of is getting hit in the face unawares by spider webbing ... your personification of ones tears in such a place is super says i ... dead flies ... we create these horrors in our dark corners and paint them with unapproachable horror so as never to be looked at in the light .. but they fester don't they? powerful stuff ma'am! really has me thinking! thanks for sharing
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

1 Week Ago

Dear Mr E, I woke from a dream and this sprang out:)
Many thanks for your thoughtful response.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

no... its so very unhealthy for us to entertain them ... wrapping and re-wrapping in webs so thick ... read more



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This me wonder where did these thoughts come from? Very original my dear

Posted 1 Day Ago


Dear Chris. Amazing use of words. You allowed the reader to feel and see your words. Trapped like dead flies. I liked this strong description. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

3 Days Ago

Thank you Coyote. Pleased hyiu enjoyed.

Chris
This is very interesting and dark and what is even more impressive is that these short words can have a lot of impact and give some meaning. Lovely piece, I liked this.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

3 Days Ago

Many thank yous Lavi for your very positive review. Very much appreciated.

Chris
felt this, and serves as a reminder to me that I seem to constantly need, to let go of stuff . I need to go dust the cobwebs from the darkest corners of my mind, maybe I won't be the one crying anymore.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

4 Days Ago

Really appreciate your interpretation Silent1. Best not let the dust gather in the mind. Be sure to .. read more
dang .. the Cafe' is presenting senryu today. just started my visits and already two out of three .. this one is super dark and all i can think of is getting hit in the face unawares by spider webbing ... your personification of ones tears in such a place is super says i ... dead flies ... we create these horrors in our dark corners and paint them with unapproachable horror so as never to be looked at in the light .. but they fester don't they? powerful stuff ma'am! really has me thinking! thanks for sharing
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

1 Week Ago

Dear Mr E, I woke from a dream and this sprang out:)
Many thanks for your thoughtful response.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

no... its so very unhealthy for us to entertain them ... wrapping and re-wrapping in webs so thick ... read more
Ooh, I saw the title and was immediately drawn. Lovely writing! Hope your well

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

1 Week Ago

All ok here, fingers crossed. Hope the same for you too. Pleased you enjoyed this little senryu that.. read more
The Ink Chapters

1 Week Ago

It brings such imagery , especially the last line
The Ink Chapters

1 Week Ago

It’s haunting, and I feel like during these times it’s appropriate, this dark corner we are in
Oh my... so profoundly and beautifully powerful!
Brilliant!

Sharonlee

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

1 Week Ago

Many thanks sharonlee. Your visit and thoughts truly appreciated by this writer. All good wishes.read more
this is so short, but it's all that really needed to be said. I love this. it really resonates with me, thank you.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

1 Week Ago

Pleased to meet you on my page and especially for your thoughtful review. Many thanks undisclosed.read more
undisclosed

1 Week Ago

I'm new to this forum, but I wanted a place where I could read poetry and have others read mine. I h.. read more
Chris

1 Week Ago

Goodness me, how many did you read? I've got hundreds on here:)) Can't thank you enough. Will add yo.. read more
Tears being trapped like dead flies...

This say so much in a few short words. I have had tears trapped in my heart like flies in a spider web many times in my life. I also like the imagery that these words paint.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

1 Week Ago

Trapped tears hurt. Many thanks PB for checking in. Have a great day.

Chris
Poetic Beauty

1 Week Ago

You have a great day as well
My eyes grow dim... and I seldom notice the
cobwebs in my mind. But then I remember
the times when hearts were aglow with
amber moments of eternal love and affection.
tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Hi Chris... I have experienced tears; however,
I prefer a Dream Catcher. Be well and safe.. read more
Chris

1 Week Ago

Thank you dear friend :)
Patricia Wedel

1 Week Ago

Hi Chris... I recently posed a Haiku... I need your heart print

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