Another Lovely Day

as sun glare burns bright
energising bones weary from
coolness of recent June days

a mallard lazes on the pontoon
absorbing the early morning heat
dozing in half sleep

willows in the distance dip their
tumbling tresses into the river's
mirror reflection

while a single feather in its softness
a white purity caresses the surface water
with a light morning kiss

there is bliss for those who dwell
in moods of blue if they take off their
shoes and dance to nature's gift

how uplifting is this coming our way
what's more not a penny to pay for
gazing on sights set before our eyes

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

This one could be read as an antidote to a stressful day's work and then a bout of evening rush hours traffic. The word pictures conjure up images of peacefulness in the mind. And, as the poem states, they are all without charge. Forget the iPhones and just go outside for a while.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you John. Yes, free of charge and wonderfully uplifting. Get outside and put those IPhones down:) A message really for the young. I think us oldies know how to appreciate a breath of fresh air.

Chris

[keith]

your keen observations of all things nature often intrigue with an almost too damn happy for the hardened manner of my being.
this piece brings to me a moment of silence as the words chosen command to slow down once again and take the better voyage
damn you chris shaw for making me a better being as i often get too wound up in my warrior ways
a most enjoyable read, once again

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Keith, it appears from what you are saying that my poetry is good for your health and well being :))) It calms the warrior. You know I kinda like that very much. Where have you been. Haven't seen you around so much? So pleased you enjoyed this little read.

Chris

[keith]

oh i've been around but not so much. this is my busy season with the garden and processing of my birds for my freezer and others. my garlic and onion harvest was very good just waiting for tomatoes to start ripening. the blackberries and figs might be a very 'fruitful' harvest, just need to make certain there will be plenty left hanging for the birds. starting to see many last year hatch cardinals hanging around. always a good sign of things to come when the brilliant red makes it's presence. july and august bring fish next then green tail shrimp will pack the freezer for the coming winter. venison will end out the year for freezer 'filling and then the process starts over again. self reliance is not an easy task. always planning 6-8 months ahead.

i'll be around here and there. appreciate the reads and yes it does have a calming effect but there is much to be concerned about with the next episodes in the demise of our democracy as jan 6 was a failed attempt that set the ground work for another uprising. sadly we may have reached the apex of modern day democracy.
hope all is well with you and yours 'across the pond' as some would say. peace

[Chris Shaw]

Oh my you have been busy, and I complain about my lot:) Such hard work but then I figure it must be so rewarding too. Thanks for takin time out to keep me up to date. All the best.

[Sami Khalil]

So serene and uplifting on Nature's scale. I'm not for crowds, traffic jams and noise. I enjoy walks, hikes, swimming, camping, canoeing, sight seeing in nature, enjoying God's handiwork.
From what I see from pics, Britain has some unique and beautiful places to behold.
It takes a talent to describe all of that like yourself.

[Chris Shaw]

We do indeed have some incredibly beautiful places in the UK Sami. We also have our cities that I prefer to stay away from. I don't like crowds or noise either. Thank you kindly for your encouraging words and your visit is most appreciated.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

Wowee! You are welcome Chris.

[Alan S Jeeves]

...and another lovely poem Chris. I am an avid reader of pastorals and this one is so uplifting.

Kind regards, Alan

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Alan. I am fond of pastorals too. I appreciate you stopping by to read this one. Happy Sunday.

Chris

[Aura]

A peaceful scene has been created by your words. Just one of those nice cool june days, perfect for taking a walk. Thanks for sharing!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Aura. Yes a beautiful June day. A good to be alive day. I am grateful to you for your encouraging thoughts.

Chris

[Aura]

My pleasure!

[Dave Brown]

sounds like you are not into sweating through rush hour traffic, with steam rising off burning black pavement and middle finger greetings all round
I fail to understand why
still time in the day to go and find a jammed shopping mall or two
Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Dave, I keep away from crowds whenever I can. What you describe is one of my worse nightmares. Give me the countryside or a seascape any day:) Have a good weekend.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

✔️ .

[Chris Shaw]

Good jolly Saturday to you. Have a good un.

[Temperance]

I was there enjoying nature with you. Your imagery puts us right there and, how beautiful it is. I want to dip my toes in the water and relax. I have enjoyed this read very much, Ms. Chris. Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

I like dipping my toes as well. Thank you Temp for your kind words. Pleased you enjoyed the imagery.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

Mother Nature holds the Beauty of love to her Breast where the Milk of human kindness dwells. Be blessed at the Rivers Edge. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

I am content to be by the river Pat. So much nature all around, far from the crowded towns and streets. Just where I prefer to be. Thanking you for your kind thoughts and wishing you both a happy and peaceful weekend.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

Good morning Chris… we do need shelters for our delicate skin; otherwise we would be frozen or baked. We have the Rappahannock River in our Town that gives us a feeling of flowing with the Ripples and the sounds of Nature. Be blessed on the Rivers Edge. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Pat. It is exceptional hot here at the moment. Sending my very best to you both across the pond and thinking about how much pleasure your avian friends visiting your backyard bless you with. Very warm wishes.

Chris

[Hebe]

Lovely words …. Really places you in this peaceful scene.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Hebe for your kind thoughts, pleased you stopped by. Have a good weekend.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

how much we get to see for free, if we just look at our surroundings...and what beauty you see from the boat.
I just took off my shoes but have no boat upon which to dance.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You might not have a boat, but you have an imagination and know how to use it. Thank you dear J for your thoughts.

Chris