Another Lovely Day

as sun glare burns bright
energising bones weary from
coolness of recent June days

a mallard lazes on the pontoon
absorbing the early morning heat
dozing in half sleep

willows in the distance dip their
tumbling tresses into the river's
mirror reflection

while a single feather in its softness
a white purity caresses the surface water
with a light morning kiss

there is bliss for those who dwell
in moods of blue if they take off their
shoes and dance to nature's gift

how uplifting is this coming our way
what's more not a penny to pay for
gazing on sights set before our eyes

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

This one could be read as an antidote to a stressful day's work and then a bout of evening rush hours traffic. The word pictures conjure up images of peacefulness in the mind. And, as the poem states, they are all without charge. Forget the iPhones and just go outside for a while.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you John. Yes, free of charge and wonderfully uplifting. Get outside and put those IPhones down:) A message really for the young. I think us oldies know how to appreciate a breath of fresh air.

Chris

[Stuart Munro]

My sort of poem , nature is free , lovely wellwritten Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning Stuart. Thanks for reviewing. I have to say this Monday morning isn't quite so pleasing. Pouring with rain at the moment. Hope your day is a good one. All the best.

Chris

[Stuart Munro]

I used to live in Berkshire , in Sunningdale , I went to Charters school ,love that place , shame it’s raining, I’m ok here ,

[Chris Shaw]

Berkshire is a large county, so I don't know Sunningdale well. We live a hundred yards from the Oxford border and close to the Thames. Yes still raining here. Pleased all ok for you.

[Stuart Munro]

Hi Chris ,Oxfords nice , Sunningdale is next to Ascot racecourse , hope your rain stops

[Davidgeo]

In another life I bet you'd be a hunter of birds in one way or another.

Even though you don't write like it, I can tell that you're a predator.

[Chris Shaw]

Now that's a thought about someone who can't even kill a wasp:)

In another life you could be like Mother Theresa

Chris

[Davidgeo]

Nah, I'm a monster all around. But I can see you... you are a bit more than

[Chris Shaw]

.. the eye can see? I take that as a compliment:)

[Davidgeo]

Maybe I just want to have sex with you? That is how the world really works as you know....

[Davidgeo]

I'ms sorry.... I gotta stop saying s**t like that. You deserve so much better.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes I do, so behave.

[Davidgeo]

You don't know what you deserve. This thing is weirder than you think.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A very nice evocative write al fresco style detailing the joy of simple pleasures in beauty appreciated. I enjoyed.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Fabian. We live bkadder in challenging times sso must learn to appreciate the gifts we are given. I akwats find that the natural environment lifts me. Sending all good wishes for a happy weekend.

Chris

[@r[@nE]

Just being an observer of nature can be way too peaceful sometimes and the poem itself depicts how much of a nature lover you are.
The imageries used in the poem is just so beautifully presented. You are indeed among the most inspirational writer i have come across in the website. Thanks a lot for sharing such beautiful works.

Regards,

@r[@ne

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for such an encouraging review. You've certainly lifted my spirits today. I appreciate your visit. Happy Friday.

Chris

[Lisasview]

Good morning Chris,
Oh, such a lovely poem... Nature always at its best...no matter what.
Wonderful to be outdoors and smell the air and enjoy the trees, flowers, mountains, etc.
Nearby we have a a farmer with about 20 goats.. so when we walk we are able to view them.. Often there are new ones..so so small.. love it... Then, the other day a farmer (who speaks no english) pulled three huge sweets onions out from the ground and handed them to us through his fence... Now..this is what life is about!!!
And, one of the reasons we moved here...
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Lisa, thank you for your lovely visit. Like me you really appreciate the natural environment and fresh air. I love how your farmer gifted you onions. It is hot here today, very hot. Making the most of the morning. Happy Wednesday.

Chris

[Lisasview]

What a surprise...as it rained last night...ofcourse we had just watered and Bob had spent over an hour staying killer mosquito stuff around the house yesterday morning.. Ah well..
I am so happy that I was able to post two new poems and plan to post Guardian of Memories soon.
Oh, and it is rather hot here today as well..
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

I will take a look at your new work later today Lisa. Isn't that sod's law for you. Water the garden and then it rains:)

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Chris

[Robert Haigh]

Nature has many great sights, aromas and sounds to offer, and most of us enjoy the sunshine, when it is there. I go for walks in the local countryside several times a week, with just my camera bag for company. Usually no more than a mile or two, but there is always something good to experience, from butterflies and bees visiting the flowers, to horses and cattle in the fields. And the trees - I am a great lover of trees. Nature can soothe our soul if we wander among her treasures at a leisurely pace. A fine poem, Chris, poetically rendered! I enjoyed the read!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Robert, we share a love of nature. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Hope you are enjoying the hot weather.

Chris

[red93]

Lovely thoughts and beautifully evoked Chris - I am assuming this is the Thames near Reading - beautifully done.

[Chris Shaw]

Near Caversham Lakes. Views from the marina just off from the Thames. Thank you Tony. Hope your day has been kind to you.

Chris

[red93]

Trip to the DWP yesterday. I qualify for a £200 advance from the Universal Credit payments. Good news indeed !

[Chris Shaw]

Good news Tony. Good to hear :)

[red93]

More Good News this morning Chris. One of the Agencies I am on the Books of - WB Employment - confirmed my employment with them. Obviously with the regrettable fall-out with Caroline I have not been available but WB were very good and they are looking for a Role for me now. I explained all about Caroline and WB were absolutely fine.

It is 2 months today since I left the marital home btw.

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhh what a keeper says i! thank you for the "moment" ... i even put me naked feet into the cool of your river's mirror .. here in the Ozarks of AR it has been blistering hot ... 100+ for amost half of the past week and this morning .. around 5 AM letting Mr. Beau out .. it was soooooooooooooooo cool ... 60s .. off with the AC and open wide the windows and doors ... tho you celebrate the opposite ... i am thoroughly enchanted and lifted up in your poem .. thanks always .. for sharing Ms. Shaw!! :) peace on ya!
E.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Mr E. Your temperatures would be too hot for me. We had our own 90 degree day last Friday. I stayed indoors till the evening. Yes early morning can be the best part of the day. I bet Mr Beau enjoyed his early start. Pleased I transported you and your toes took a dip in the Thames and you enjoyed the moment. Sending all good wishes across the pond with my thanks for your visit.

Chris

[Richard Knox]

Chris,
What a lovely picture you paint here! The gentle imagery, reinforced by the use of the many sibilants, whispers of the calming, warming natural beauty of the scene. We have had an unusually chilly June here in eastern Washington, US, also, making mornings like you’ve described rare this year, and all the more precious. Beautifully done!

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Richard, many thanks for your encouraging review. Pleased you enjoyed a morning by the Thames and I hope your own weather improves soon. All the best from across the pond.

Chris