Mistakes

Mistakes

A Poem by Casondra Baerwolf


I miss us

The way we used to be

Its not the same

and it never will be

I loved you

Did I mess this up?

I feel like I did

I'm sorry for all the times

all the times I was mean

I didn't mean to

Would you please forgive me?

I know what I did wasn't right

I miss us

Best friends to enemies in a flash

All the laughs and cries

I really didn't mean to do this to you

I don't deserve your forgiveness

I wish I never said what I had

I wouldn't be hurt or confused

Neither would you

I can’t take back what I said or accused you of

But I can say I’m sorry

I'm so sorry

Are you willing to forgive and forget?

I miss us…

© 2014 Casondra Baerwolf


Author's Note

Casondra Baerwolf
What do you guys think of this one? Could I use some help with the use of commas or periods?

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Added on November 13, 2014
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Casondra Baerwolf
Casondra Baerwolf

Waterloo, WI



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Im very passionate about my writing. I would like to become a journalist one day. My biggest loves are my family, friends, pets, and of course my writing. I let out all my emotions into my writing and.. more..

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