FOR YOU LIKE THE SUN

I want to be for you like the sun on winter’s snow... melting you... transforming you into raging rivers... torrents of spring’s song... a wild fury of crystalline light in trembling, tumbling energy... awakened and unleashed to wonder's land... for you are anything but commonplace... a liquid lit desire only sleeping... when I see the world illumined in your eyes... I burn as the fires of a thousand daybreaks... shattering the powerless fragrance of night within... gaze at me now... let me become for you like the sun... 

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Whoa, this might have even melted my ice queen heart...lol. Very sensual and just pure magic. What girl could resist such heat and not melt??... And where do you find these images you post? Another whoa is needed for that! Haha... Well done my friend. Beautiful!

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, I see right through that ice and snow... Thank you for always spreading warm fires wherever you go... :) And as for images... I have a very visual soul.. always seeking to be fed... Happy New Year, dear Kalypso...

[Ken Simm.]

This feels like it was written in sanskrit a thousand years go by candle light.

[An owl on the moon]

Ken... thank you so much for your presence here.. your light always.

[Corset]

well if this isn't drop dead gorgeous I don't know what is! Sensual, sexy, I need new words to describe this one, for you like the sun, man , this goes into favs.

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your words... how they make me feel the warmth of your soul.. :)

[DIVYA]

We thrive on a beloved's gaze...Love empowers, illuminates and lights up our eyes, the passion melts us ad we become as one. This poem radiates warmth and passion and bliss. So appreciated Craig.

[An owl on the moon]

Divya, you radiate that empowering light wherever you go... The one who loves you must feel your endless sunlight... Thank you for shining it here for us as well. :)

[DIVYA]

You have just filled my day with amazing warmth and sunshine...Thanks for your beautiful and delightful words Craig.

[Mark]

unrestrained devotion breaking away at the icy walls of insecurity allowing hearts beat to rage and swell into bubbling torrents of emotion... sparked.. then set ablaze in the heat of passion... to feel again, a new dawn, a new world.. when seen through the eyes of another that lives, lusts and loves for you.

as always you never fail to move me with your use of nature to create visuals to accompany the emotion in your writes.

thank you Craig, I love this poem

[An owl on the moon]

Mark, thank you so much for your kind words! Wishing you a week of most amazing wonders.. Write them down for us, please! :)

[Helen Woodward]

This is beautiful Craig, filled with soft thoughts and reachable wishes...superb and unique...as always.

Blesssssssssssssssss

Helen xx

[An owl on the moon]

Helen, I'm so glad you were by! Thank you! Blessings.. endless blessings.. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Breathtaking piece. You are not common place is what everyone wants to feel like.each line builds a tale that is beauty and this piece is graceful inits beauty.

[An owl on the moon]

And you are not common place. Hope you know that, Poetic Beauty. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the kind compliment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, had to take a breath after this torrent of passionate profusion....

i was being carried in the current.

[An owl on the moon]

Always such a gift to read your words, jacob. Thank you! :)

[Pax]

wow, so romantic indeed........

your words in this pages is felt as we your readers my friend are amaze on how deeply beautiful this piece is.... sigh... speechless!!!

[An owl on the moon]

Pax, my friend, I am so thankful for you. How I hope this week brings you deep, wild joy. :)

[AprilRN1210]

people come along with the ability to connect on such deeper levels awakening desires long forgotten and buried deep.. they can break down those walls, melt that snow, and let the flames ignite the raging fires and torrential energy that fuels the passion inside releasing into trembling, tumbling, torrents.. that heated bliss getting stronger and stronger shattering those things that held you back, opening your body, mind, and heart to the heaven that exists. the one who holds the keys to those desires and knows how to use it.. everything about that is absolutely delicious.. truly makes each of our bodies a wonderland... sure has me melting over here-- enchanted by the imagery and the underlying passion just under the surface.. the phrasing in this is exquisite and sensual in your magical way.. you are so talented and this will melt more than my frosty heart.. It is not only incredibly romantic, but sexy and elegant...well done Craig...

[An owl on the moon]

I am... speechless... Thank you so much for your endless encouragement... loving light... sweet, wondrous presence... You make our world here a much better place. I deeply apologize for my delay in responding to your review... my life was wildly out of control. Finally was able to put on the brakes... Have a beautifully warm week, dear poet... :)