You make poison taste like wine�

Oh, those toxic relationships!

 

 

You make poison taste like wine;

Make dying a breathtaking time.

 

Suffocating beauty draped in white

Drowning in your childlike light.

 

Feed me cakes with sugared shards;

Bury me alive in your crimson yard.

 

Your toxic skin is soft and warm;

In burning screams I fall deformed.

 

Stab me, shoot me; I don’t care…

I need your touch, your taste, your stare.

 

You make poison taste like wine...

Reviews

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Ouch! The title is captivating, color and choice of font makes this write even more inviting to read. I was truly drawn into this :
"Feed me cakes with sugared shards;
Bury me alive in your crimson yard." ~ Wonderful lines. This poems speaks of bittersweet love and fatal attraction to the extreme. Nice work.

[Wildfleour]

I came back to read again. So much truth here! Wine - red wine. Like blood.

Yikes.

[Gandré]

aww... to write about feelings is so wonderful, this reads like a searing poem of love and subjugation, it cracles with suspense, richest poem today !

[Ru Banerjee]

Outstanding work of poetry with irresistible choice of words and imagery! as always, a true, unique masterpiece by Craig Froman.

[angelina blue]

this poem is inspiring me..awesome choice of words and the idea behind it is so true

[The Dark Passenger]

Wow, captivating :) I loved it from start to finish, and I enjoyed it's lyrical almost playful rhyme even though the words were so filled with darkness and anguish. Very truthful, and yet beautifully crafted at the same time... we can all relate to parasitic relationships after all...

thank you :)

[Adeline]

Whoa! This is amazing and I absolutely love it! The title and picture caught my eye as I was scrolling through your writing looking for something to review to return the favor (thank you again). This is an awesome poem and you're an awesome writer from the looks of your profile. Keep it up!

[Gema]

WOW I LOVE THIS SO MUCH LOL =)
AND THE FONT TOO =)
IT IS A LUST FOR LOVE ALMOST LIKE VAMPIRES I IMAGINE =)
WELL DONE I LOVE THIS XXX

[LSS]

Loved It! Loved It! Loved It! What an imagination, what a graphic picture of words. Way to stick to the subject and still dig into the pit to unearth more descriptions, and keep the morbid flowing. Thanks
LSS

[nostal]

Wow. I loved it.

[just is]

You make poison taste like wine;
Make dying a breathtaking time.

Lovely opening lines and boy this write took me in I liked this alot, this is so warm and breath taking.