Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Know That I Too
We are never alone (a poem for mental health month)
Of Wolves and Men

Of Wolves and Men

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Beware of wolves in men’s clothing…

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The men used to circle her 

Fangs grinning at her young form

Eyes clenching her scarlet cloak

She was definitely what he hunted…

 

 She tread the darkest streets

 And met him in a crimson room

The beast was fierce and deliberate

Ripping her basket from her fingers…

 

Little scarlet cloaked for fear

 In darkest city streets did cry

How the wolf in shrouded head

Did vicious steal her smiling grace…

 

With starless twilight frost

Breath stolen and skin scarred

Dearest ruby lips callous wept

Living victim in numbed existence…

 

© 2011 An owl on the moon


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Wonderful concept…..
And the portrait really heralds the whole meaning of your poem….
It is very apt…
Fantastic….
Very creative….. there is much truth in the message….you conveyed through the poem….


Posted 13 Years Ago


I have to say that I just love this! I feel like I've opened up and old book of dark tales and from the 1800's.. You penned the story so well and perfectly I could picture it my mind clearly.. I can't wait to read more of your work:) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great piece, like a dark version of Little Red Riding Hood. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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And there are too many..

Posted 13 Years Ago


ooh, nice! this piece is dripping with fairytale darkness and symbolism... wonderful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Craig, Oh, wow! I could go so many ways with this one..From a wicked woman of the world in old age to the woman caught in a loveless marriage..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Read again and dig deeper and tell me what you see about the winter woods..Sunflower who is about to bloom..

Posted 13 Years Ago


One must watch out for the wolves. Very dark writing, different from your usual, you have given more meaning to the traditional tale.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Whoa! This is so well written and kind of deep as well as dark.
I really enjoyed this piece. Very well done Craig!

Posted 13 Years Ago


There seems to be many more ugly wolves any more .Than there are beauties maidens That said They non the less inspire great works like this one .

Posted 13 Years Ago


Grief, this is creepy and yet has a familiar ring to it .. an update on little Red ..

I really appreciate the way you play with rooted thought then turn it this way and that to give a new perspective.

Great pic too, Craig ..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2011
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