Void

Garden of geese
Quacking bills of white
Bread
I am completely
Astonished at the Magnitude
Of our
Chemical connection


Hemispheric seduction
Swimming in deep eyes
Falling away into galleries of
Galaxies inside her
Cosmos iris
Cornea crustacean

Fibonacci sequence
Is correct
Patterns emerge
Out of her mouth
In VowelS
Symphony's kiss

Sequential future
Sequent word
Inked cerebellum
Lucid spines
& a placebo
Participating group
Of Venus nuclei

Jazz is on the radio
For sake of the
Real man made
Groove
In the oviduct of
Space
There is only jazz to
Listen to

Over art and
Color stands a bigger
Number
And that
Is the nonexistent
Reality we call life
If you look at
The fact
That you are alive now
And before you were alive
You didn't exist
But you exist now
And you know that
Someday you will again
Cease to exist
And return
To the
Void
But now
In the current of
Present Moment
Floats our eyes
And the questions they
Render
In the ocean of
Life
Poetics optics
Are mathematically
Accurate
&
"Artificiality" was
On my résumé
As well as this:

Spectacular spectacles see
seventeen salmonella sapphires
slipping silently
simply sinking slower
subterranean soil secretes
synthetic sailors singing songs
simply seeming symphonic
Swedish soup surrenders sacred secrets
Saturn seals skies
skipping solemn stones
surfacing seven shadows

Author's Note

Based on a Spanish language telenovela

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

I don't have the works to express your piece and will need to read again. The flow and word use is very nice. Some poetic ideas I am considering trying, but this one looks outside my wheelhouse at the moment. Thank you for sharing.

[613]

Wow. This was written exquisitely well. Fabulous job!

- Brittney

P.S. If you wouldn't mind checking out my novel, HIM, I'd truly appreciate it. I'd like to send it off for publishing but won't until I feel I have enough feedback. I think people forget that it's 20 chapters long. Haha. Most only comment on one or two chapters. So everything in between & the ending is neglected with barely any commentary. It's kind of frustrating.

[Gaston Villanueva]

That ending was incredible haha

"If you look at
The fact
That you are alive now
And before you were alive
You didn't exist
But you exist now
And you know that
Someday you will again
Cease to not exist
And return
To the
Void "
I liked this part a lot and I enjoyed the nuances of your explanations
Jazz music, what a music that is
Nice job Chadvonswan

[Chadvonswan]

Thanks for reading gaston. I'll meet you at the seed vault