Infinitely

There's something that pulls at us...

Riding on a ripple's wave
this new thought echoes through
Resonant images rolling from within
eroding Cape Overlook with the Sea of New

And as the tides are compelled by the Moon
insight wears away the stones of the soul
The gravity can never be taken for granted
no visible forces ever have quite the pull

The changes are as old as the landscapes of time
ever refreshing itself with a familiar newness
Slowly offering a whole new view of sight
to the heart and spirit that watch the shore

A life they know of, through their eyes
each moment relives itself continuously
With every crash of every wave on the coast
comes a broader understanding of the rhythm

Their amenity is absolute and necessary
for they may be two but they learn as one
And attentively is how they truly need be
to truly see the changes throughout eons

In their eyes, they know of what life is
taking pleasure in this timeless lore
Soaking in the crash of a wave
that rode in on a ripple.

Reviews

[al25]

Great imagery

[Aven]

fantastic poem, love how you tied it together at the end !

[KL]

"no visible forces ever have quite the pull"

That really says it all, doesn't it? We're all being pulled in a single direction by nothing tangible, and as much as we may kick, fight, scream, b***h, hate, love, dance, laugh, learn we'll all move to that ending point together, and there we will realize the pointlessness of our struggle. The last two lines really brought this together for me. Very nice.

PS. It's spelled Infinitely*.

[Loner]

A poem with great depth in it, nice read.

[Akshat♥]

great poem...i just loved it.tc:)

[Talkativeted]

A really good poem. Excellent.

[Myrcei]

You're an amazing writer. You took me somewhere new. Amazing.

[Steve]

You are a very good writer.......very nice words!

[The Perfect Stranger]

i can literally feel your emotions from this poem. i like the way you describe the whole thing, its very real to me. great job!

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

love it!!!!!!!