Baby Bird

Baby Bird

A Poem by Chelsea
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Story of many baby birds.

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Baby Bird

Woven into a nest

Tucked deep into your mother’s breast

 

Wind tosses you

 

Upon the ground

Waiting to be found

 

Your mother flies away

 

You fought

But you now rot

© 2011 Chelsea


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This is sad but the honest truth. I found a baby bird once that had wonder quite far from it's own fallen tree and attempted to care for it until it was capable of caring for itself... but he died through the night and I felt so down about not being able to save him from his fate of death because of a fallen mishap. I enjoyed it because I connected with it... and I like a short poem with deep meanings, it's very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A sad ending to your poem. Nature can be very cold and beautiful also. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw. This made me sad, but it had the strangest essence of beauty.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmmm, this is really really really really sad. D:
But good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it.. The ending was not at all what I expected, and its a nice surprise at that, if sad.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like how you have the rhyme in it, it has a very nice flow!
Its sad though:(. I hate it when I find baby birds dead, or any animal for that matter:( today on a walk I found a dove frozen into the ice, it was wasn't nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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good job on it sad but still good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats what ya get for trying to do things on yer own...f*****g birds

lots of feeling here

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad..but well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:( i've seen this happen before. its horrible

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad. I thought this would be sweeter, but oh well. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Chelsea
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