The Park

The park, where children play, where darkness attacks.

The Park

In the park

When it’s dark

The darkness creeps

From where they all sleep

Swirling

Whirling

A pot of trouble

 

In the park

When it’s not dark

The children are busy

Making me quite dizzy

Happy

Oh so sappy!

A pot of joy

Author's Note

A lot of people have told me not to give away my poem in the author's note, so I wont. But message me if you want to know what it means! It has two meanings, that I wrote anyways, I'm sure you'll find more.
Please review, would love to know how you read this!

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Day and night are like day and night in most cities..Now even some parks are not safe in the daylight..Drug deals going down..People shooting..Never know what will happen..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your presence sent me a ray of sunshine..Sunflower

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

This is one of your best works - perfect picture too!

[Midday_Mystery]

Its amazing how light and dark can co-habitate in the same place. It is so great That God is with us to protect us from the fruits of darkness... great write!

[Linear]

Good verses evil, well it's only a guess, but I think you are like sunshine in a glass

[Marie Harrison]

Reminds me of images of ghosts in the playground. Very mysterious poem.

[trainwreck]

I feel like this is about someone going from being an immature punk to having kids and taking them to the same park they were a punk in. Also, day and night. Good job!

[Poetic Beauty]

The imagery is done really well. I'm not sure what the meaning is exactly of this poem. The flow is easy to follow.

[~~Mere~d~i~t--h~~]

So simple, and so beautiful =)

[Calypso]

I take it to mean trouble makers in the park goofing off. You don't have to tell me what it means. I'll leave with that.

[Coyote Poetry]

Each time I read the poem. Create a different vision. Many actions can happen in the light of a day in a park. In the night a different breed begins to roam. A excellent poem. Made me think.
Coyote